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Perhaps consider switching it back to good. And fast. It could cause a small headache.
Oh boy. We see that logo.
Make it bit smaller and less agressive.
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This font choice doesn´t look professional. You want to look like a modern trustworthy company. Also line height and letter spacing needs attention.
Check contrast ratio for text.
Also make sure that your text lines are below 75 characters. Ideally below 60 or 65.
CC needed. Don´t hurry you have time
Button shape looks odd. Also colors look dull compared to logo. Primary CTA should stand out and be attractive.
Don´t use two primary CTA-s next to eachother. Users don´t know what to click.
Balance baby! This text is proportionally too important.
Also for better conversions you should try to focus on the messaging part. Create FOMO or urgency.
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Background looks trendy. I have seen design influencers in X use it. 👍 keeping it trendy. However it does look quite strong and disturbing.
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